Posted by Steve | Posted in Casting | Posted on 30-03-2010
Tags: art, bronze, Casting, lost wax casting method, sculpture, wax

Please help me with English?
Hello:D
Can you please correct my grammar or vocabulary mistakes and make it better ?lol
Thank you
As I read chapters six, nine, and selected topics from the lectures, I learned many essential terms and methods relating to art such as ,silkscreen printing, monotype, lost wax methods, casting and many more. At the same time, I became really interested to find out about different methods and techniques the artists use in their printmaking and sculptures and how they impact the way viewers think and feel.
I think it’s very well written, and would only make a couple of suggestions:
-remove the comma before ‘silkscreen printing’
-perhaps change the section ‘At the same time, I became really interested to find out about different…’ to ‘At the same time, I became very interested in finding out about the different…”
-insert comma after ‘sculptures’
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